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If anyone is interested in reading any of my writing, I would be happy to share a short story that I wrote in my fiction writing class, or a chapter or section of the novel that I am writing.
I look forward to hearing comments and suggestions from anyone who is willing to give them to me. Thank you for reading.

It sounds like a really good story. Feel free to post a sample in the "Post a Sample Forum" here:,13.0.html

Welcome to the site!

I am writing a novel that I started at Eastern Connecticut State University. My professor gave the class a writing prompt where we had to use the phrase, "The truth of the matter is." I wrote a story about an old man, Norland, who visits his lifelong friend, Royal, on his deathbed. Royal's grandson is in the room with his grandfather and Norland tells the boy a story about an adventure involving a plane crash that he and Royal had when they were young men. The story was well received so my professor encouraged me to continue the story. The following week I wrote about how Norland and Royal met as boys in rural Alabama in the spring of 1945. This too was well received so my professor encouraged me to continue the story, which I did through an independent study with her during the fall 2015 semester. The story chronicles the lives of these two men from the time they were boys until Royal passes in the near present day. The adventures include mischief as the two grow into adulthood, their college lives and marriages. A plane crash while working as relief workers, a run-in with the KKK in Birmingham during the civil rights years, and Royal's struggles with injuries sustained in the crash including a trip to the mountains of Peru and the deserts of New Mexico to seek treatments from Shamen and Indian healers. So far, I have roughly written 9 chapters and I  am working to finish the rest of the story, but as we all know, life can, and does, get in the way.
I have no platform. I retired from the Naval submarine service in 2007 and just graduated from school last month with a major in accounting and a minor in writing. I live to write. Accounting pays the bills and feeds my family, but writing is what I love to do. I enjoy writing so much that I even found it rewarding to write my accounting research papers while in school. If anyone is interested in reading any of my writing, I would be happy to share a short story that I wrote in my fiction writing class, or a chapter or section of the novel that I am writing.
I look forward to hearing comments and suggestions from anyone who is willing to give them to me. Thank you for reading.
eBooks / Kindle Scout - $1500 Advance
« Last post by Stacey Cochran on November 03, 2014, 03:44:45 pm »
Hey, folks, I need your help. My novel Eddie & Sunny is in the brand-new Kindle Scout program. Kindle Scout is a program designed to give an unpublished novel 30 days to drum up as many nominations as possible. The books with the most nominations are given close consideration of a publishing contract with an Amazon imprint, a $1,500 advance, and 50% royalties on ebooks for five years.

For the remainder of November (2014) you can see my novel Eddie & Sunny here:

Please nominate the book. It only takes about three seconds.
How to Publish a Book / How to Get Published
« Last post by Stacey Cochran on September 02, 2014, 05:03:53 pm »
Having interviewed hundreds of traditionally published authors over the past decade, I have seen two essential pathways to publication with a traditional publisher.

1) You find a literary agent who wants to represent your work, and that literary agent sells your book to an editor and a publishing house.

2) You self-publish your book and it sells enough copies (10,000+) that it interests an editor or gives evidence to a literary agent to use in selling a subsequent book to an editor.

What other pathways have you heard of that led to a book deal? What are the specific steps a writer takes to make a traditional publisher want to contract with an author?
Fascinating data released from Author Earnings comparing the latest trends between self publishing and traditionally published ebooks.

The bullet points:

  • Big-5 publishers are massively reliant on their most established authors to the tune of 63% of their e-book revenue.
  • Roughly 46% of traditional publishing's fiction dollars are coming from e-books.
  • Very few authors who debut with major publishers make enough money to earn a living - and modern advances don't cover the difference.
  • In absolute numbers, more self-published authors are earning a living wage today than Big-5 authors.
  • When comparing debut authors who have equal time on the market, the difference between self-published and Big-5 authors is even greater.

To read the full article, visit:
Interview with the Authors / Robert Gregory Browne Interview
« Last post by Stacey Cochran on June 29, 2014, 03:50:44 pm »
Interview with Robert Gregory Browne

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: Well, so first let's start with your new company Braun Haus Media. What are you looking for from writers? And why did you decide to start it?

ROBERT GREGORY BROWNE: I started it in order to publish my own books. It's that simple. At first it was just a publishing name for Amazon and others to list. I felt and still do that it's much better to have a "publisher" listed. But since I was publishing my own books I thought, why not expand a little, make it a formal publishing company. So I'm working on setting up an LLC and have a couple of projects lined up for late this year and hopefully early next and after that we'll see what happens. If things work out well, I'll expand further and open the house up to submissions, offering authors a MUCH better royalty structure than they're likely to get with the big boys. But we aren't there yet.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: A lot of traditional publishing folks (in the press at least) keep arguing that eBook publishing is destroying publishing. Clearly you disagree and see the new publishing frontier as an opportunity like none other in recent history. Is it possible that both sides are right in this argument? What do you think of how the New York Times pitches Amazon as the evil villain and traditional publishing as the hero? See for example Hachette Chief Leads Book Publishers in Amazon Fight 

Is the New York Times piece objective journalism?

ROBERT GREGORY BROWNE: First, how could anything that opens up opportunities to people like me (meaning authors, who, you know, actually create the product) destroy publishing? And how can a technology that embraces a generation raised on computers and offers a convenient - and pleasing - way to deliver content be BAD for publishing?

And let's face it, publishers are making a LOT of money from ebooks, so what's the complaint?

When someone in traditional publishing says that ebooks are bad for publishing, what they're really saying is: our way of doing things is headed down the drain and the more this new technology makes us irrelevant, the less chance we have of making a living. There is a long history of creatives being dependent on middlemen to get their work to the public and those days are disappearing and so, eventually, will most of the middlemen. It's just the way of things.

But that doesn't mean that publishing is being destroyed. I'll still be publishing. And so will many many others. And there will always be authors who don't want to do it all, so they'll come to guys like me who will be offering them a great royalty. And big publishing will likely always have the blockbuster writers - unless they all get wise and realize they can make even more money by directly selling their books. But I don't think that's likely to happen anytime soon.

The bottom line is that ebooks are simply a new way of delivering content. That's all. Publishing will be fine.

As for Amazon, the company that stirs things up is always cast as the villain. And the New York Times is establishment publishing. So, of course, they'll demonize Amazon. It's all pretty ridiculous, but people go crazy when their livelihoods are threatened. Can you really blame them?

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: CBS Television and Sony Entertainment produced a television pilot of your novel Kiss Her Goodbye. How did this pilot come about and what was the experience like seeing your novel translated into a pilot?

ROBERT GREGORY BROWNE: Here's how it happened. Producer Carl Beverly (Justified, Elementary) was in a bookstore and happened across an anthology I was in called KILLER YEAR, which was edited by Lee Child. Carl read my short story, liked it, and decided to read one of my books. He choose Kiss Her Goodbye, loved it and contacted my agent to see if the rights were available. He also wanted the rights to the short story, BOTTOM DEAL, which I now publish under my Braun Haus imprint, but it had already been snatched up at the time by another producer.

Having learned my chops in Hollywood, I didn't think much of all this. I knew that very few options turn into anything concrete, but I wasn't about to turn down a little extra cash and there was always slim chance it might really happen. Flash forward a couple months and Carl contacts us to say that CBS loved their pitch and wants a script. One of the producers involved was director Michael Dinner (Justified, Sons of Anarchy, etc., etc.), who decided he'd write it. And he did a hell of a job. He stayed pretty faithful to the book - even used a lot of the dialogue I'd written - and I was pleasantly surprised to find that I loved it. And so did CBS who immediately green lit a pilot episode.

My involvement in the project consisted of receiving an email or phone call now and again, and during filming they invited me out to Chicago to watch. The set was at a lighthouse off the lake, which is where the climax of the story takes place. And I have to tell you, when I saw Dylan Walsh and Michael Rappaport running up a hill toward that lighthouse with a squad of uniformed cops, tears came to my eyes. It's as if every dream I'd ever had about writing had come to fruition at that moment.

I sometimes forget that. I'm living my dream.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: Your screenplay Low Tide was selected as a winner for the Nicholl Fellowships in Screenwriting Competition in the early 1990s. How did winning this competition prepare you for writing for television? How did you get your foot in the door writing for TV? How important were your collaborations with Larry Brody, and how did you both meet?

ROBERT GREGORY GROWNE: Well, I never really had my foot in the door. Maybe a toe. Brody and I wrote animated action shows like Spider-Man Unlimited for Marvel and Diabolik for Saban, but animation wasn't really considered mainstream television.

Brody, of course, is a television veteran who has been the showrunner or written for just about every action or detective show you can think of from the seventies and eighties and early nineties and I learned a lot from him in terms of pacing and structure. But the best part was the drive to lunch once a week and talks of showbiz and politics and observations about the absurdities of life.

We met when I found out he was the head writer for a new animated show for Fox Kids and I sent him an email telling him about my work and asking if I could send him a script. He said yes, then later called me up and asked me to work with him as a staff writer. And we pretty much hit it off instantly.

I'm not sure if winning the Nicholl really prepared me for writing for television. It's geared toward feature writing and was a wonderful experience, especially since it led to the sale of Low Tide at Showtime and got me into the business. But the preparation for television had more to do with the ten or twelve unproduced screenplays I wrote before Brody and I started working together. But, again, we were writing animation, and that was a whole different animal. Fortunately, Brody was very patient with me while I learned.
Literary Agents / Stacia Decker Literary Agent Interview
« Last post by Stacey Cochran on November 08, 2013, 05:12:47 pm »
HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: How did you first get started in publishing? When did you know you wanted to be a literary agent?

STACIA DECKER: I started as an unpaid intern at LINK: Farrar, Straus & Giroux while I was working on my MFA thesis. When, as an editor, I was laid off in the LINK: Houghton Mifflin Harcourt merger, I started considering agenting as an opportunity to work with the authors I really believed in.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: When you look back at your time at Harcourt and LINK: Otto Penzler Books, what did you learn about the business?

STACIA DECKER: I learned a lot about the bookmaking and selling process from direct interaction with the sales, marketing, publicity, and production teams, and I learned a lot about book packaging from working with paperback and reprint titles. Of course I also learned about the acquisition process, which is helpful knowledge to have as an agent.

Seeing a relatively small editorial team in action, I came to some of my own conclusions about the importance of a clear editorial mandate and the thoughtful presentation of a cohesive list. As an agent, I think of my client list in some of the same ways I would an imprint - while there's breadth, my list is governed by my tastes and, as such, has a distinct character.

Working with Otto Penzler on his imprint, I also learned how welcoming and supportive the mystery community is. That's one of the reasons I now concentrate on mystery and crime fiction and have tried to build a client list in which my authors feel as supported by their fellow clients as by me and the Maass agency.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: You represent some outstanding crime fiction writers like Allan Guthrie, Seth Harwood, Declan Burke, Jeff Shelby, and Scott Wolven. What is it about the harder aspects of life that appeals to you?

STACIA DECKER: Some of this is basic escapism. Crime fiction takes readers behind the scenes into illicit trades or worlds that most of us don't experience in daily life and allows us to play out our fantasies and fears. The world, as it's represented to us in the news and elsewhere, is a threatening, chaotic place, and our lives can be filled with mundane anxiety. Crime fiction provides a more visceral, exciting - and yet remote - scenario to worry about and convinces us we could, at the least, survive. It lets us live vicariously through a worldview that is often tougher, savvier, or more comfortable with handguns.

Mystery fiction has traditionally been a moral genre, one that reassures us by reinforcing social norms and restoring order in the end. That said, I'm more interested in stories that blur distinctions between right and wrong, good and bad, and make the reader complicit in some bad actions and questionable decision making. These characters force us into a more nuanced contemplation of morality. They exercise our empathy and call into question our own moral judgment. And they are - to me, I suppose - a more realistic form of wish-fulfillment, one in which we get to break the rules while still struggling against fundamental constraints.

I'm not particularly interested in characters that are extraordinarily smart, attractive, accomplished, fit, and talented in the kitchen, or in scenarios in which our hero has access to all the latest secret agent hardware or the ability to fly off into a new life at a moment's notice. I'm more interested in a flawed, recognizably human protagonist dealing with the limits of his place within society, within his family, and so on. The working-class tragedy gives us a window onto how an awful lot of us live, and allows us to ask how we would - given the constraints of our real lives - react ourselves.  I'm also interested in the vulnerability and complications of the male identity, and that's a subject that plays out in so many ways in crime fiction.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: Describe how the job at LINK: Donald Maass Literary Agency came about.

STACIA DECKER: My first position as an agent was with Firebrand Literary. When Firebrand closed shop a few months after I joined the agency, I had to go out on my own or find a new home. I had quite a few clients I wanted to protect, and I was only interested in joining an agency with a great reputation, established foreign subagents, and a real love of genre. I'd worked with the Maass agency through Otto Penzler Books, and I called Don to ask his advice and we started talking. Needless to say, my authors were thrilled when I announced we had a new home with Don.  I cannot say enough about Don's editorial insight, ethical judgment, and professionalism and how much I enjoy working at DMLA.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: You've done some fine writing yourself. How do you compare advocating for someone else's work in contrast to your own?

STACIA DECKER: Just as it's easier to edit someone else's work, advocating for someone else's work is much easier. I can unabashedly believe that my client is a genius and tell anyone who'll listen. A good writer doesn't believe he's a genius and, if he does, he shouldn't say so.

Authors also aren't necessarily in the position to understand how best to present or pitch or package their book. Maybe they're not objective about how their prose will be cast (literary vs. faux literary, for example), or which comparison titles will sell the book to bookstore category buyers, or why it's better to appeal to a distinct genre audience than to cross categories. They're most likely not aware of what specific information or presentation or argument a certain editor or imprint or bookstore needs to put a book on their list and sell to their markets. For this type of advocacy, authors need agents.
HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: How would you characterize the purchasing atmosphere for crime fiction at the start of 2010?

STACIA DECKER: There are good crime editors and good mystery imprints out there, but acquisitions are hard. We're in a blockbuster era in which editors have a harder time finding money and slots to grow authors, which is how many of today's bestsellers got their starts.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: What kinds of things lead to a breakout bestselling author? What separates the midlist author from the NYT bestselling author? And is there any pattern or behavioral traits that you’ve noticed that drive an author from being okay selling to being great selling?

STACIA DECKER: If only we knew. There are many more books bought with the hopes - or expectations - that they become bestsellers than actual bestsellers.

One theory is that books sell when they reach a certain cultural saturation point - through name recognition or media coverage, for instance - at which consumers feel they have to buy them. That's hard to arrange. And while some current bestsellers slowly built series success and name recognition to the point that they're now a must-buy, that's become less of an option for authors as houses become more reluctant to keep publishing a series through those building years.

Another theory - at least for why books don’t break through - is that they don't provide a certain comfort zone for readers. For instance, an author who gives her discouraged, overworked protagonist a (perhaps realistically) disrupted, dysfunctional home life might see her work deemed too dark. Readers have not been reassured by her worldview that there is ultimately order and satisfaction in life for good people.

In retrospect, we can look at a breakout series and see a great - culturally relevant - premise and a reader-friendly approach or prose that seems to cinch it. But that a premise will be culturally relevant at a certain point? That's much easier to see in retrospect than in advance.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: How important is perseverance in our business?

STACIA DECKER: Some part of you has to just not know how to do anything else - at least that's the reason everyone I know gives for sticking with this business even as they bemoan their fate. The publishing industry doesn't make it easy for anyone, and there's not necessarily a conventional payoff to sticking with it. You have to just not be able to help yourself.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: If you had to make an educated guess about what will be hot in 2010, what do you suspect might be big that we haven't already seen?

STACIA DECKER: Ferrets? Really, who knows. I'm not much of a trend-chaser; I just work with what I love. In the crime fiction world, I'm seeing a resurgence of country noir, with meth labs and dog fighting being popular themes - I'd be happy if that hit big.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: What do you love most about being a literary agent?

STACIA DECKER: The ability to work, both on an editorial level and in a career-building capacity, with the authors I believe in.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: What drives you up the wall?

STACIA DECKER: Run of the mill unprofessionalism pushes my buttons. But in general I think people are trying their best.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: How do you sign on new authors? Does the entire agency have to support it?

STACIA DECKER: I conduct the due diligence I feel necessary - a phone conversation, maybe some revision - and Don takes the advise and consent role.

It's a collaborative environment, and in discussing projects with colleagues I often get valuable feedback and great suggestions about pitching and positioning clients’ work, but we operate with a baseline respect for one another's tastes.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: When selling a debut author's book, how do you weigh building a career for him/her with the desire to get a very large advance?

STACIA DECKER: I'm in it for the author's career and, while I wouldn't advise an author to reject a large advance without other options, I might advise an author to take a lower advance from a house I thought would better publish the author. Some books are better suited to a particular format or would be a better fit on a certain list; likewise, houses are known for different strengths and varying levels of stability. And, as we've seen, an author is often better off earning out a smaller advance and being thought of as a good investment than failing to earn out a large advance and being termed a disappointment. I'm going to consider seriously any house that offers a small advance but offsets it with genuine, on-going enthusiasm and a savvy publishing model.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: How important is the follow-up book, and how do you work with your authors in building their careers? What kinds of things can an agent do to ensure that it grows?

STACIA DECKER: An agent is first helping a client think about what his career goals are. Then the agent considers what the right first book is given these goals. For instance, an unpublished client can only be a debut author - with a clean sales track and his headshot in the publishing house's debut author pamphlet - once. So an author who doesn't want to sneak onto the publishing scene may agree to put aside a completed short story collection, which will find less enthusiasm in the marketplace, in favor of offering a novel as his debut property.

In order to set up the follow-up book's success, the agent is first trying to find the right house for the author in placing the first book. Ideally, that means a publisher that believes in the author's career, publishes the first book well, and maybe even commits to the second book from the start.

But publishers are increasingly less likely to make those kinds of commitments. Often this means, when it comes time for the follow-up book, the agent is both pushing for that commitment from the house and advising the author on his options given the realities of his situation and his goals. Those options are not always ideal.

The follow-up book needs to sell better than the first one. And that's hard if the first one didn't meet expectations. Increasingly, publishers and booksellers have already made up their minds at that point, and smaller marketing budgets or orders for the follow-up don't typically help its sales.

Thus, an agent can't always ensure that sales grow or that a client's career grows in the manner he'd first envisioned. But the agent can help the author make his strongest case for the publisher's, booksellers', and readers' continued support. An author wants each book to be better than the last, and this means not only taking lessons in craft from the writing of the first book but also looking at plotting and themes to find ways to expand the scope - to make the book bigger. A good agent pushes the author to think about these issues and look for these opportunities in his writing. It's an unpredictable business, but the agent is the author's partner in making each book as good as it could be and better than the last.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: What are you looking for in a piece of writing?

STACIA DECKER: I like a strong, distinct voice, tight prose, fast pacing, and dark humor. I'm looking for a big hook at the start and a plot that develops quickly with a minimum of exposition. I want to hear that narrative voice talking to me from line one, putting me in someone else's head. Deft characterization that captures the nuances of social interaction and dialogue usually charms me. I'm partial to realistic but subtle specificity about occupations and other areas of expertise.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: How long does it take to know?

STACIA DECKER: Not long. As with anything, the best and the worst are easiest to tell. Sloppy, cliched, or mundane prose is pretty clear from the start, just as is a sharp, funny voice or a surprising opening premise.

A work that leaves me on the fence at the start will make up my mind for me by twenty to thirty pages in. That might not sound fair, but I'm going to end up living and breathing any novel I take on, so I have to really love it. It doesn't take long to know whether I feel passionately about a character or would want to reread a story over and over before it even goes on submission.

A work that starts strong but develops flaws will keep me reading with revision in mind. And a work that absolutely hooks me will have me praying it holds up but thinking "that can be fixed!" when I come across a stumble.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: Are there any specific elements of craft that beginning writers tend to neglect?

STACIA DECKER: I see way too much exposition. A writer has to figure out how to tell a story without telling me the story. Even a first-person narrator should not be conducting a lecture. Descriptions, backstory, and other details should be revealed organically, if they're even necessary. Good writing is all about what isn't said, what the reader infers and fills in.

I also see too much unwitting pastiche. Of course genres have conventions, and now even twists on the conventions have become conventions. But overly familiar characters, cliched language, and same old story plotting reveal a writer who's not really thinking about his characters or who's playing it safe in an attempt to appeal to everyone that appeals to no one. Too often I feel a writer is rewriting a story he's already read.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: Do you have any pet peeves that you see beginning writers doing over and over?

STACIA DECKER: Well, see above. And even though these have become pet peeve cliches, I still see a lot of characters waking up, characters sweating, characters waking up sweating, and characters with model good looks.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: If you could change one thing about the industry, what would it be?

STACIA DECKER: I'm way too pessimistic to believe that any change I made wouldn't have catastrophic unforeseen consequences.

HOW TO PUBLISH A BOOK: At the end of the day, what is the most satisfying aspect of working in publishing?

STACIA DECKER: The authors, both working with them and having the chance to contribute to their work in some way.
Interview with the Authors / Re: RJ Keller Interview
« Last post by Stacey Cochran on November 05, 2013, 03:56:23 pm »
Agreed. What I get questions about so much is whether self-publishing will hurt your career... and which self-publisher to go with. Most new authors want a physical copy of a book. I usually direct them toward or Lulu, but I'm sure there are others out there that work just as well now. Maybe better.
Interview with the Authors / Re: RJ Keller Interview
« Last post by Bob Schultz on November 04, 2013, 04:38:04 pm »
Interesting interview. I can relate to RJ's frustration at the seemingly monumental task of finding an agent or publisher! Belief in one's work is paramount to completion of the dream. Fortunately, in this hi-tech age quality self-publishing is becoming the norm for new writers. Quality work and the effort to bring it to light will likely meet with success. Keep the faith. Renew the spirit. Reject rejection and use this website with vigor!
Robert Schultz
Query Letters / Re: Sample Query Letter to Literary Agents #1
« Last post by Stacey Cochran on October 28, 2013, 04:55:59 pm »
Hey, JK, thanks for posting. I think the opening paragraph of your letter is okay, but it's not really a hook for the reader.
  • Start with a question. Asking your readers to think about the topic is a great way to get them ready to hear more. It can be a simple question like, "Could it be?" Or it can be a more complex question like, "Why is it that cats always land on their feet?"
  • Use descriptive words. Creating a picture in the reader's mind can make him or her feel connected to your writing. Use words that describe the scene you're trying to create. For example, if you’re writing about things you like to do in the winter, you can start with, "Jumping in big, slushy, icy puddles is certainly on my list of favorite things to do in the winter, but nothing tops a snowball fight on a cold, blustery day."
  • Leave it a mystery. Give your readers just enough to make them curious. Include a few details and leave the rest to their imaginations. Try something like, "It was so noisy in our classroom that the walls began to shake. We couldn’t have known what would happen next."

Also, it looks like your letter might be cutting off after the word "Lambra." This happens if there's any unusual font (or even a curly apostrophe) on these forums.

Feel free to post the whole letter as an attachment, and I'll give you feedback on the whole thing. There's an "attachment and other options" under the text box window when typing on the forums.
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